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Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 2:31 pm
by theman572 [enjin:14634463]
Please check out my preview on the wolves please comment on it. Thank you
http://scarecrowgrin.com/2015/09/22/2015-2016-minnesota-timberwolves-team-preview/
Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:08 pm
by bleedspeed
There are some typo's. I would add some depth.
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[*] No talk of Sam Mitchell coaching the team
[*] No talk of KG
[*] LaVine is a SG more then a PG
[*] Could touch on Shabazz, Bjelica, Miller, Jones Dieng, Pek
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Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:16 pm
by theman572 [enjin:14634463]
Thank you for the advice.
Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:21 pm
by longstrangetrip [enjin:6600564]
theman572 wrote:Please check out my preview on the wolves please comment on it. Thank you
http://scarecrowgrin.com/2015/09/22/2015-2016-minnesota-timberwolves-team-preview/
I hate to be critical, but...
1) Do yourself a favor and hire a grammar consultant and editor.
2) At first, I was a little annoyed when I saw that you misspelled Tyus Jones. But then when I saw that you also misspelled the names of our other two draft picks from this year and last year, I realized that you were just messing with us...well played, theman572.
3) I thought we added some Serbian guy named Bjelica too. Maybe I heard that wrong, or maybe he's just not expected to have the same impact as Damjan Rudez. Oh well, no big deal.
4) Somebody is going to have to help me with "the PG situation could be a very conversional situation". I don't really think it is going to be that conversional at all, but I'm admittedly not an expert on assessing conversional situations.
5) I need to get more sleep...I'm obviously crabby today.
6) Welcome to the board :d ?
Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:30 pm
by bleedspeed
theman572 wrote:Thank you for the advice.
No problem. You will get some good advice here for sure. Having thick skin is a really good thing to have.
Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:30 pm
by theman572 [enjin:14634463]
I fixed the spelling, thank you for your help, u r right my grammer needs work.
Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:50 pm
by Q12543 [enjin:6621299]
You are no expert or true fan. You wrote NOTHING about the devastating losses of Jeff Adrien and Robbie Hummel.
Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:52 pm
by longstrangetrip [enjin:6600564]
theman572 wrote:I fixed the spelling, thank you for your help, u r right my grammer needs work.[/quote
Mine too sometimes.
Glad to help out...always like to lend a hand to an up and coming writer.
I've got an insider tip for you as a special welcome gift. My sources tell me that the Wolves may be considering buying Anthony Bennett out of his contract. I don't think this is out there yet so I need to keep my sources confidential, but I thought I'd let you be the first to go public with it.
Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:55 pm
by longstrangetrip [enjin:6600564]
Q12543 wrote:You are no expert or true fan. You wrote NOTHING about the devastating losses of Jeff Adrien and Robbie Hummel.
Adrien and Hummel are gone? Tough to keep up with all the late breaking news. Q, you are indeed connected.
As long as they hold on to Raduljica, I think they will be fine this year.
Re: Timberwolves Preview
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 4:05 pm
by AbeVigodaLive
Was this for a school project or something?